Writing Asessment 2

The Deep Jump

One early morning I am walking when I smelt smoke from the trucks and pollution from the cars.The road was rough and it was cloudy and windy.I see 2 boys jumping off the wall into the dark blue water.The rocks were getting in my shoes and feet.There is a bridge that looked light brown and looked so old.I see cars and trucks that are making all sorts of sounds and the weather is  cloudy and looked liked it is going to rain.The smell was salty and smelt like smoke and even pollution.The big white boats were on the deep dark blue water with tiny little fishes inside.The trucks were dark green and others were white vans.The ground was hard and dark dark grey.I hear seagulls and trucks and vans.The boys were thinking of this is dangerous or if it was not.The boys felt scared because this was their first time jumping off a high wall.The boys thought this is crazy to do this but they still did this.The one boy is jumping in the deep blue water.Another boy is sitting on the ground waiting for his turn to jump off the giant white wall.