Wednesday, 10 September 2014
Rob Dyrdek
The Deep jump
The Deep Jump
One early morning I am walking when I smelt smoke from the trucks and pollution from the cars.The road was rough and it was cloudy and windy.I see 2 boys jumping off the wall into the dark blue water.The rocks were getting in my shoes and feet.There is a bridge that looked light brown and looked so old.I see cars and trucks that are making all sorts of sounds and the weather is cloudy and looked liked it is going to rain.The smell was salty and smelt like smoke and even pollution.The big white boats were on the deep dark blue water with tiny little fishes inside.The trucks were dark green and others were white vans.The ground was hard and dark dark grey.I hear seagulls and trucks and vans.The boys were thinking of this is dangerous or if it was not.The boys felt scared because this was their first time jumping off a high wall.The boys thought this is crazy to do this but they still did this.The one boy is jumping in the deep blue water.Another boy is sitting on the ground waiting for
his turn to jump off the giant white wall.
Monday, 8 September 2014
Atonio Science
- Water look like
- feels like
- taste like
- Where do we get it?
- Where does it come from?
- What do we do with it?
My hospital flower
My hospital flower
In the nursery room Any was helping her mum.They were helping Mrs Bull because was blind.Then Mrs Bull ask Any a Question.She said Any what colour is my flower.Any replied back waxy yellow with pink freckles.After that a visitor came and Mrs bull was excited because Mrs Bull never had a visitor.The visitor gave her a orchid.Then Mrs Bull told Any the whole story.One week later Mrs Bull was crying because one of the cleaners told Mrs Bull that her flower was dead.After that Any went to the flower shop to get Mrs Bull another orchid.When Any gave the orchid to Mrs Bull to replace with her other orchid.After that Mrs Bull was very happy because her sons and daughters came to give her some support.
Atonio Prayer RE
Prayer
Lord thank you for this stick because it makes the leaves stick to the trees.Its scent smells so sour. Thank for the bark because it looks nice.Thank you for everything and your kindness to make something.Thank you god for the sea and all the fish in the world.Thank for trees and fruit.Thank you for making space and earth and the sun.Thank you for everything you have provided us.
Writing Asessment 2
The Deep Jump
One early morning I am walking when I smelt smoke from the trucks and pollution from the cars.The road was rough and it was cloudy and windy.I see 2 boys jumping off the wall into the dark blue water.The rocks were getting in my shoes and feet.There is a bridge that looked light brown and looked so old.I see cars and trucks that are making all sorts of sounds and the weather is cloudy and looked liked it is going to rain.The smell was salty and smelt like smoke and even pollution.The big white boats were on the deep dark blue water with tiny little fishes inside.The trucks were dark green and others were white vans.The ground was hard and dark dark grey.I hear seagulls and trucks and vans.The boys were thinking of this is dangerous or if it was not.The boys felt scared because this was their first time jumping off a high wall.The boys thought this is crazy to do this but they still did this.The one boy is jumping in the deep blue water.Another boy is sitting on the ground waiting for his turn to jump off the giant white wall.
Thursday, 4 September 2014
Golden Bats news
Golden Bats
One week ago scientists revealed a new species of bats. Scientists called it the golden bat.The bat is recognised to have bright golden and yellow with a black or golden face with black ears too. Scientists in Bolivia discovered the species. Some people have already seen this species. The bat is named after the greek legend King Midas. In the wild, golden bats eats small insects and roosts in holes in the ground. There are 100 mouse eared bats in the world. Some are found in South America, Africa and Alaska. Golden bats don’t sleep in caves, golden bats sleep upside down on trees or leaves. Some people find golden bats awake in the morning.
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